polkatime1I hoped he was dead when I woke the next morning,  eight hours after I left him holding the hand of the next hospice volunteer.

We call it “vigil:”  a bearing witness and keeping company with the actively dying. We do it for them and their loved ones —  exhausted, grieving families and friends — who are desperate for rest, but don’t want them to die alone.

The volunteer coordinator told me that Dan — let’s call him that — had Parkinson’s disease and was ready to die.  She said he had stopped taking nourishment through a feeding tube the week before,  but was struggling to let go. That his 80-something wife, in poor health herself, had spent the day with him and badly needed sleep.   She told me Dan liked polka music, and there were CDs I could play for him.

This last — the idea of dying to polka music — appealed to my sense of the absurd. But there was nothing even blackly comic about it.  It turned out that Dan liked country classics, not polka. So as I sat at his bedside,  I half-listened to songs about the kind of angsty love he had traded for marriage and family more than a half-century earlier. I gazed at long-ago photos of him in military uniform, proud and handsome and full-faced, with twinkling eyes and a winning, toothy smile.

And considered the emaciated man in the bed, his cheeks and temples sunken, his mouth agape, the dentures out and the dry lips, scabbed,  curled in around the gums. And listened to the rattle in his chest, the only sound he could now make.

The nursing home staff came with medicine to loosen the phlegm, and morphine, too. They came to change Dan’s diaper and his bedding, rolling him this way and that, his thin arms and large hands floating helplessly in space. They checked his oxygen; they suctioned his mouth. They brought more morphine.

Still, his limbs contracted spasmodically; he grimaced, and gripped my hand with surprising strength. “You’re safe,” I told him. “You can trust this. You can let go.” And felt like a liar, or worse: a cliché.  Because if what I said was true at all, it was true in the infinite evermore, not in the singular suffering of this particular man in this agonized moment.

Dan was awake,  and in his slate-blue eyes I thought I saw pain, and a kind of bewilderment.  So I stoked his greying hair and said the one thing I knew was true:  I’m sorry. I’m sorry for your suffering.

I want to think that dying as Dan was dying is the back end of a devil’s bargain we make with modern medicine. That, in choosing to prolong our lives beyond what is natural, we invite a painfully protracted death.  Left to ourselves, we might die younger, but also more boldly and quickly:  the sudden, serious cardiac arrhythmia; the catastrophically elegant explosion of some vital vessel deep in the brain.  Not the slow, attenuating poison of chemotherapy, but the late-stage cancer itself, galloping headlong through the body with clean and violent dispatch.  The failing organ left to fail;  the naturally deadly let be deadly.

We might, then,  not suffer as Dan was suffering.

But I know it’s not that simple, that in death,  as in life, there is no clear course from Point A to Point B. Nothing is certain.

I once had a black Australorp, a gentle,  industrious hen,  afflicted by a respiratory condition and by age. Six months earlier, I had taken her sister to the vet to be put down. But chickens have a complex physiology, so euthanizing a bird is not as simple as putting down a dog or cat.  After the vet gave my hen the injection and left the exam room, I turned off the lights and held her while her breathing slowed and her head dropped limply to her breast.   It took a long time,  her dying, and the vet kept cracking the door, splitting the dark with jagged fluorescent light.  He wanted to press a stethoscope to her chest, because she needed to die before he could go to lunch. I would gladly have pummeled him senseless had I not been holding her.  So I decided to let my second Australorp, who had been fading for a month, die on her own.

But it seemed to take forever. As the days passed, her breathing became more labored; eventually, she quit walking around with the flock and took to the coop, sitting in the pine shavings.  It was hard to watch; every breath was an effort.  She made me consider whose suffering we most wish to end with euthanasia.

And still, she kept on, into what I was sure would be her last evening and — to my surprise — through the night.  So I took my morning run and then resumed my place beside her in the coop, holding vigil.  My barred rock — they’d grown up together — was pecking her gently, as if to rouse her. I shut her outside. A short while later,  the Australorp gathered herself, rose slightly, stretched out her neck and then flapped her wings, as if she was flying away.

And she had.

Death came more quickly for my other hens, including the barred rock, who was the leader of that first flock and, at age 8, its last survivor. I had younger chickens by the time she died, but by then, she identified my partner Chele and I as her flock. On lazy summer days, Chele and I would lie on our backs in the grass beneath the apple tree, considering the clouds, half-dozing. And Rock would settle herself contentedly between us, close her eyes and dream chicken dreams.

I knew something was wrong when the dizzy spells started. She would seem fine, and then not, usually after having pecked aggressively at some bug or morsel. She wobbled, then righted.  I knew her time was coming, and held her more, and fed her the treats she loved: the grapes and hard-boiled eggs, the peanuts and sunflower seeds. And, one day in the coop, live mealworms, her favorite.

I thought afterward that I should have known better, that the unsteadiness I had observed was a sign of imminent cerebrovascular calamity.

Rock went after the mealworms with abandon, pecking vigorously. And then made an odd sound, and stumbled, and fell. I  knelt to steady her as she sat in the shavings and thought — for one desperate, delusional moment — that she might be alright.   But it was already effectively done. She stood and fell again — stood and wobbled and fell — while I watched, helpless, as the seconds expanded and distorted. Sixty.  Maybe 90.  No more than that.

Then she lifted herself, stretched out her neck and flapped her wings. And in the way of her kind, was gone. And I stood there, fragmented:  my mind denying and recoiling,  my heart knowing and breaking,  and the unbridgeable space between.firstflockchicks

We put her in the ground the next morning, on a bed of pine shavings scattered with treats, beside the other hens, beneath a canopy of lilacs: my first flock, together from the start as chicks, again made whole.  And I could see it had been a mercy — that death had been quick with this animal I loved,  that she had not suffered.

I want death to be as Mary Oliver imagines in White Owl Flies Into and Out of the Field:

… maybe death isn’t darkness, after all,
but so much light
wrapping itself around us —
as soft as feathers —
that we are instantly weary
of looking, and looking, and shut our eyes,
not without amazement,
and let ourselves be carried,
as through the translucence of mica,
to the river
 that is without the least dapple or shadow,
that is nothing but light — scalding, aortal light —
in which we are washed and washed
out of our bones.

I later learned that Dan lived for 26 hours after I left his bedside:  more than a day.  I thought that his dying had been too long,  too hard.   And hoped that death itself, when it finally came for him, had felt as soft as feathers.

I hope it will be that way for you, too, and for me, and for all of those we love, the people and the animals both.

That each of us, in our time, will leave these bodies as easily as we came into them, and  — gently,  gently —  let ourselves be carried to some soft and brilliant place.  Home.  Finally home.








  1. Beautiful post! Thank you!


    1. You’re welcome. Thank you for reading.

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    1. Thank you for sharing!


  3. Theanne aka magnoliamoonpie · · Reply

    Thank you for sharing 🙂

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  4. I will now forever think of your girls whenever we sing that old spiritual,

    “Some glad morning when this life is o’er
    I’ll fly away
    To a land on God’s celestial shore
    I’ll fly away”

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    1. Perfect. I hope there’s a way for this grounded human to be reunited with them.


  5. I stood vigil over my grandmother through her final days a few years ago. My family took shifts and since I was working graves at the time, naturally, I took the night shift. The nurses did the same with her as with Dan. In and out with morphine, suction, lotion. They checked this, cleaned that, repositioned her here and there. It seems to take forever – the suffering. Sometimes, she would murmur and talk in her sleep. It seemed like she was reliving different times in her life. Some moments seemed joyful, others racked with pain and sorrow. I shared a few lucid moments with her in the end. A few days before she passed, when even the nurses were sleeping, I looked up from my knitting and saw her watching me. We talked for a while until she fell asleep again. It was precious and bittersweet. She passed a few days later quietly and in her sleep, but not without pain. I remember breathing a sigh of relief when she was gone. That too was bittersweet.

    Your story brought me back. I would never trade those final days for anything.

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    1. What a tender and honest remembrance — both the beauty, and the suffering. Thank you for sharing this.


  6. Susan Lukwago · · Reply

    Great picture of Chele and Rock too!

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  7. Susan Lukwago · · Reply

    Thank you for sharing this beautiful experience. On Sunday, I had the wonderful opportunity to visit a long-time member of our church, Evelyn. She was 102 and her children had made the healthy decision to let her go. She was only on morphine too. They encouraged me to hold her hand and talk to her: a first for me. Surprisingly warm and strong too, Cate. There was a piano around the corner and two rooms down: she was at a hospital and turns out the piano was rarely played. Evelyn enjoyed when I played and her children loved to sing. So we sang and played a few hymns. Her daughter said Evelyn opened her eyes for the first time in a week, and smiled. Other patients and a nurse joined us. Evelyn’s eyes were closed when we got done. I was thanked by the children – my honor – and said good-bye. I just learned Evelyn went to “some soft and brilliant place, home” less than 12 hours later. Home.


    1. Thank you for sharing your experience; I’m glad you were able to be of comfort to Evelyn and her family.


  8. La revue de Claire · · Reply

    I enjoyed your aticle


    1. Glad to hear it. Thank you.

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      1. La revue de Claire · · Reply

        It’s a pleasure

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